ARC Review: Veiled in Darkness (Eternally Mated #2) by Valerie Twombly {Tour} ~ Excerpt

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Eli scanned the battlefield. Hacked body parts littered the ground and pools of blood coated the landscape. The earth groaned as she absorbed the foul liquid of the fallen demons.

The battle had lasted hours. How many he wasn’t sure, but his muscles ached and blood coated his clothing. Most of it from those he’d slain, but some belonged to him. He was too weak and exhausted to heal himself. Besides, his only thought at that moment was of her. He’d spotted Ashley the last time they’d battled. She was seen collecting the demons’ souls and sending them––he supposed––to Hell. Lucifer would likely have her bring them back to life so this hellish nightmare could start again.

Eli cringed at the thought.

He’d tried to speak with her, but when she’d spotted him, she had vanished. This time… This time she would face him. It had been a month since she’d gone. Seven hundred and thirty hours, a fraction of time to an angel but an eternity to him. He missed her so much his heart actually ached. Every morning he awoke and wondered if she thought of him. Every night he went to his empty bed and prayed she remembered he loved her. Had she made it through the day? Was her mind still intact or had Lucifer broken her? He tried not to think about it because if he did, he was tempted to fall again, and this time he’d make sure he made it all the way to Hell. Luckily, his sanity stayed in check, and he reminded himself of the gift Ashley had given him. The sacrifice she had made to save his soul would never be forgotten. He would remain steadfast in his duties while he searched for a way to save her.

She was here and her back was to him. Her hair, pulled into a single braid, draped over one shoulder.

His fingers itched to unravel the golden strands and set them free.

Black wings, speckled with gold dust, were spread as she pointed to each demon and watched their body parts vanish. Eli wrapped his own wings around his body and cloaked himself. Now that he knew she would flee, necessity dictated he hide his presence. She was far too young and inexperienced to escape him now.

He watched…waited in silence as she made her way around the field. For some reason the others ignored her, and then it dawned on him. They couldn’t see her. A smile lifted his lips and pride swelled inside him.

So, my little angel has learned how to cloak herself as well.

She was close. He waited for her to finally tend to the demon body he stood over. He reached out and grabbed her. She gasped, her power flaring.

He revealed himself. “You can’t run from me this time.”

Her face lit with relief then panic. “Eli, you need to let me go.” Anger flashed in her green eyes. “You know I could have killed you!”

“You can’t kill your own mate, so stop running from me.” He pulled her closer and erected a barrier around them to keep others from viewing their private moment. “I’ve missed you. Are you okay?” He moved his gaze from her eyes to her full pink lips then dipped to her breasts. She wore some black leather thing that revealed more cleavage than he cared for her to share. Matching pants clung to her curves, and boots completed the ensemble. Damn she was hot, and his cock throbbed with need.

“I’m as well as can be expected. Now release me, I have work to do.”

“Don’t care,” he stated.

“We aren’t supposed to be together. Lucifer will punish you if he finds out,” she whispered and glanced around, likely looking for the devil himself.

“Listen to me.” He tightened his grip, fearful she’d somehow get away before he had a chance to speak. “I don’t care what that bastard does to me. Do you understand?”

“Eli, no––”

“I. Don’t. Fucking. Care.” He gave her a slight shake to bring her back to him. “He can do to me whatever he desires. If he wants to let demons pick the flesh from my bones then pour salt over my wounds, so be it.”

“No. No.” She struggled to free herself. “Please don’t say that. I can’t bear the thought of him hurting you.” She scanned his bloody clothing. “You’re hurt.”

“I’m fine.” He bent his head and claimed her mouth. Demanding and passionate, his desire for her flared white-hot. She continued to struggle, but he pressed his tongue against her lips until finally she softened and gave in. Opened to him until they were both kissing each other as if it were the end of the world. To Eli, it might as well be. Having her back in his arms, pressed against his erection, was all he wanted. He wanted to take her fast and hard, but this wasn’t the time or place. He’d forsake everything to have her back safe. He broke free, both of them panting from pent-up desire.

“I need to know you understand that I will do whatever it takes to be near you. Even if I can only have a stolen moment. If Lucifer wants to punish me, I’ll take it.” He dropped his forehead to hers. “He can’t hurt me any more than he’s already done by taking you from me. I will not let him have you.” She pushed against his chest, and he freed her.

“I have to go,” she whispered.

“I will find a way, Ashley. We belong together, and I will find a way to free you,” he shouted as she faded away. All eyes were on him, but he didn’t care. Let his brethren believe he’d finally gone mad.



Veiled in Darkness

Veiled In DarknessEternally Mated, #2

by Valerie Twombly

Paranormal Romance

Self published

May 30, 2016


The story continues…

When Eli spots Ashley across a bloody battlefield, he can only steal a moment alone with her. Powerless is an emotion new to the hunter, but it’s one he faces daily when he realizes killing the demon king in order to free his mate is out of the question.

‘Death’ was not a nickname Ashley wished to carry. Being the only one able to stop Lucifer’s evil plan was an even worse fate. When she discovers her true ancestry, fear that she will succumb to her darker side forces her to dig deep for the strength she needs to fight.

The clock is ticking and soon Ashley will face the ultimate test.



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Veiled in Darkness takes place a month after the events in Fall Into Darkness. We continue the tragic story of Eli and Ashley as they try to find a way to save those that need saving, find a way to free Ashely from her contract to Lucifer, and in the end finally be together as mates where meant to be.

This was a whirlwind adventure with several surprises along the way. The plot is crazy and the characters are dynamic. This story is more about Ashley, her learning what her true purpose is, and also coming into her own. Some of the surprising twists we learning had me floored. One was who the Maker is and the other is Ashely’s heritage. I don’t want to spoil the adventure on these points, so I wont say anymore. I also very much enjoyed several of the secondary characters. We meet a hellhound who is amusing, a demon that’s interesting, and more Angel’s.

What I Didn’t like 
At times I felt that the characters needed to talk mind to mind, instead of out loud. Some of the things they share are sensitive secrets and to say them out in the open, especially in Hell. I felt like someone would or could have learned of these things. At times the author had her characters talking mind to mind during sensitive information, but at other times they didn’t. Not consistent on this aspect.

At one point an army invades. The characters are making a big deal out of this and in a hurry to stop and find out Lucifer’s plans. Ashely is needed to do her thing, but instead of rushing off to stop this invasion as mentioned, her and Eli get it on; before she goes off to war. What bugged me is lives are being lost, the characters made a point in saying she is needed quickly, and this is her destiny, but she first has to stop and have sex with her mate.

Throughout the book we have all this build up for an ending battle. Then the time comes and it was anti-climactic, even the heroine mentioned this. I was expecting a battle scene and we get nothing.

Veiled in Darkness has a lot to enjoy. It’s a fast-paced, exciting, and engaging read. This book wraps up Ashley and Elle’s story, but it’s not over. The author gave her readers a teaser of what is to come and I have to say it has me intrigued.

Rated: 3.5 Veiled Stars

*Disclaimer: I received a complimentary ARC copy provided by Valerie Twombly with the sole purpose of an honest review. All thoughts, comments and ratings are my own.

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Valerie TwomblyAward winning and bestselling author Valerie Twombly grew up watching Dark Shadows over her mother’s shoulder, and from there her love of the fanged creatures blossomed. Today, Valerie has decided to take her darker, sensual side and put it to paper. When she is not busy creating a world full of steamy, hot men and strong, seductive women, she juggles her time between a full-time job, hubby and her two German Shepherd dogs, in Northern IL. Valerie is a member of Romance Writers of America and Fantasy, Futuristic and Paranormal Romance Writers. She is also the founder of Sexy Scribblers, a group of romance writers who bring readers new and fresh stories every month.


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2 comments on “ARC Review: Veiled in Darkness (Eternally Mated #2) by Valerie Twombly {Tour} ~ Excerpt

  1. It does feel like sex is forced into these books sometimes. I need to fight this battle, but let’s knock boots first. Glad you enjoyed it overall.
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    • Agree Melanie and overall it was enjoyable!